Friday, September 16, 2011

Ordeal by Cheque: Part II

Directions. Now that you have the rest of the checks, you should be able to explain what happens in the rest of the story. Analyze them closely. Then, write a 200 word response explaining what happened in the rest of the story and justifying your position. Again, use complete sentences and correct capitalization, punctuation, and perhaps even commas! Submit your post to the blog by no later than next Friday, September 23rd.  Be sure to read other classmates’ responses to see if you agree or disagree with them.

30 comments:

  1. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. pays a visit to Miss Daisy Windsor. He then pays $585 to the French Line because he is going to visit Banquet de France. He then buys flowers two times at the University Club Florists to buy flowers. Lawrence Exeter Sr. is making payments to Renaissance Interior Decorators to renovate his house. Lawrence then goes to the Beverly Diamond Gift Shoppe to buy a diamond ring for a girl. They are going to go on a cruise on the Hawaii Steamship Co. so that Larence Jr. can propose to his girlfriend. Lawrence Exeter Sr. makes a check out to Lawrence Jr. for $200,000 to check in at the Ambassador Hotel, shop at Coconut Grove Sweet Shoppe. Larence Exeter Jr. pays $25 for a gown at the Parisan Gown Shoppe and Lingerie at the Anita Lingerie Shoppe then they get more flowers form University Club Florists. Lawrence Exeter Jr. then goes to the Broadway Diamond Co. to buy his girfriend a diamond ring to propose with. They both go to Wall and Smith Attorneys at Law to ge their marriage licence. Lawrence Exeter Jr. gives Mrs. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. $5000 to spend for whatever she wants. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. makes a check out to Reno Municipal Court to get a divorce with his wife. Then periodically he is paying checks out to Wall and Smith Attorneys at Law. On July 5, 1931, Lawrence Exeter, Sr. makes a check out to the Hollywood Hospital because Lawrence Exeter, Jr. dies of a heart attack, he also makes a check out to Dr. David M. McCoy. The next day Lawrence Exeter makes a check to the Hollywood Mortuary to take care of the body of Lawrence Exeter, Jr. of $1,280.00

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  2. Follow my band blog OK! I will post new updates every day!!! It will include football scores and band results! Thanks, chow!

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  3. Kimberly Scheetz
    Period 5, Honors English 11
    Mr. Smoulder
    September 19, 2011
    In part two, the happy, sweet Exeter's become exposed for what they truly are... Mr. Exeter, knowing his son is gone off to college and his wife is not at home, tries to impress a Miss Daisy Windsor, whom he had been admiring for a few years now. He asked that they become a couple and she declined so he decided he would bribe her with money. He gave her $25,000 and took her to France. Then he tried to woo her even further by buying her flowers and a house to live in for the both of them, having intentions of divorcing his wife when she came back home anyways. Then he bought her an engagement ring and they spent their honeymoon in Hawaii. Fearing his son would be distraught by his father having a mistress, he sent his son the checkbook and told him he could spend whatever he wanted. Lawrence, Jr.'s signature appears on the checks after this point. He bought candy, lingerie, clothing, and flowers for many women to impress them. While flirting with women he flirted with a woman who was already taken and was from there-on-out hunted down by the man. One day he found the woman he loved so very much, Miss Flossie Wentworth, and could not get her to even waver the thought of marrying him until he used his father's ways to bribe Miss Wentworth with $50,000. She accepted the offer and they were wed. A year later they are divorced and and he married his second love, Marie Wharton. Then out of fear of the man who was stalking him still, he hired four hitmen. Two were the Walker brothers and the other two were Wall and Smith. Out of anger, the man hunted Lawrence, Jr. down after discovering that he had hired for him to be killed and he beat Jr. up so badly that by the time he was discovered he was barely alive. He was taken to the hospital that he had been born in and helped by the doctor who helped bring him into the world, but no matter what Dr. David McCoy tried he could not save him. The next day his body was taken to the mortuary. Then there was only one Exeter once again.

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  5. In the second part of this story it sounds like the Lawrence Exeter is visiting a friend named Miss Daisy Windsor. He then goes on a cruise and visits the Banquet de France shortly after. He goes to University Club Florists twice and buys expensive flowers for some occasion. It then seems like they are building a house for his son. He also buys interior decorations from the Renaissance Interior Decorators. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. then goes on another cruise but this time to Hawaii. When returning from home from Hawaii he gives his son Lawrence Exeter, Jr. a check for 200,000 dollars so that he can pay for expenses in the near future. Lawrence Exeter Jr. buys sweets from the Coconut Grove Sweet Shoppe followed by a purchase at the Parisian Gown Shoppe. So it sounds like Lawrence Exeter Jr. is planning to get married. Then the son goes to the same flower store his dad went to and also bought flowers too. He buys a ring at the Broadway Diamond Co. for 575 dollars. So maybe he is getting married. He writes a check to Mrs. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. after paying the attorneys so they may have gotten a divorce and he had to pay her some of the money he has. At the end there are checks to the Hollywood Hospital, Dr. David M. McCoy, and to the Hollywood Mortuary; so it seems that Lawrence Exeter, Jr. got sick and had to go to the hospital. But, he didn’t get better and died so they had to put him in the morgue. His dad then didn’t have to be a Sr. anymore because there is no one for him to be confused with since his son had died.

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  6. Miss Daisey Windsor planned the wedding of Lawrence Exeter Jr. and his fiance of two years, Christine. They got married on August 8th 1923. His dad was kind enough to pay for most of the wedding and the honeymoon. The wedding was held at the Banquet de France. Soon after the wedding they went on their honeymoon. The went on a cruise through French Line. A few years later the happily married couple bought land. They began to build a house on this land. While life seemed good for the young married couple, the marrige of Lawrence Exeter Sr. and his wife was not doing so well. Lawrence Sr. went on a trip through the Hawaii Steamship Company. A few days after his trip, Lawrence Sr. was trying to make up to his wife after a big fight, so he bought her a gift from the Beverly Diamond Gift Shoppe. he soon pays his son a great deal of money to keep a major secret that Lawrence Jr. was not supposed to find out. The next day Lawrence Sr. made the same mistake as before and continued to act apon his secret buy making a purchase to stay at the Ambassador Hotel. Around Valentine’s day Lawrence Exeter Jr. purchased his wife a delicious tray of chocolate covered strawberries for his wife. In the next few months Lawrence jr. showers his mistress with plenty of nice things. She gets two lovely gowns and lingerie. Two years later he purchased a diamond ring. In November 1930 Lawrence Jr. paid for marriage couseling to Miss Flossie Wentworth. The next day he hired a laywer and filed for divorce. In the settlement he had to pay his wife $5,000. In june of the following year Lawrence had to go back to court and was made to pay $75,000 to his daughter. He then hired two more lawyers to try and keep some of the settlement. A month later Lawrence Jr. was checked into the hospital. His wife stabbed him. Eleven days later Lawrence Exeter Jr. dies.

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  7. Mr. Exeter Sr. has one of the girls he went out with in high school stalk him since he became a rich company owner so he paid her $25,000 to leave him alone and never bother him again. Then he took his wife, Marie Exeter on a cruise all over the European sea line. Then because he couldn’t decide what kind of flowers to get his wife he bought her an entire flower shop. A few years later he sponsored his sons’ florist club at Stanford University. Later that year Mr. Exeter decided to move to the Riviera Heights and had the house redecorated like the Renaissance. He also bought a diamond ring for his son to give to the girl he wants to marry. Then he paid for their steam boat ride all around Hawaii. He also gave his son 200,000 dollars to pay for the wedding. Then he paid for his son’s hotel room before he left with his girlfriend for Hawaii. When they got back from Hawaii Lawrence Jr. bought the cake for the wedding and later picked out the dress for his girlfriend to wear. He then spent 750 dollars on a trip to the salon for him and his wife. The dress was finished being made and they had to go finalize the purchase. A few years later they went out and bought the flowers and picked out rings. They then got married, paid the wedding planner and the attorneys that did the marital paper work. Lawrence Jr. then gave his wife some money to go have a party. A few months later Lawrence Sr. and his wife were getting divorced so they had to go to the municipal court. The court decided that Lawrence had to pay his wife 75,000 dollars but because Jr. now runs the family business, he made Jr. pay for it. Lawrence Jr. also had to pay for the lawyers used during their court room appearance. Less than a month later Lawrence Sr. was in the hospital with multiple gun wounds to the chest and back. Remarkably he lived but his attacker was pronounced dead at the scene of the attack. The attacker was his ex-wife wanting to get all of his money and not just a small portion. He paid for his medical bills and attended the funeral of his wife and was given all of the expenses of her funeral to pay for.

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  8. Miss Daisy Windsor owns University Club Florists. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. buys flowers from her in June of 1923. He gives them to his wife as a going away present when she leaves for her cruise on the French Line. This is six days after the flowers were purchased. In August of that year, Lawrence Exeter, Sr. attends the Banquet de France and Miss Daisy Windsor happens to be there. They enjoy each other’s company at the banquet. Lawrence has an affair with her and his wife comes home from her cruise. Mrs. Lawrence Exeter has been back from her cruise for two years now while Lawrence is having an affair with Miss Daisy. He often buys things from her shop just to make her happy, but this particular time he is buying flowers to help his wife decorate their new home. The new home was purchased through Riviera Heights Company in August of 1926. Renaissance Interior Decorators help the Exeters furnish it. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. buys diamonds and other gifts for Miss Daisy and sends his wife on another cruise to Hawaii in November of 1926. He pays for his son’s wedding to Miss Flossie Wentworth. One year after the wedding Lawrence Exeter, Jr. divorces his wife. He buys a walker for himself because he has been in a car accident and it will be hard for him to walk during his long recovery. His father pays for his hospital bill when an infection from his injury spreads throughout his legs and body. Surgery is performed, but there is nothing else doctors can do and on July 15, 1931, Lawrence Exeter, Jr. dies. He is buried the next day.

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  9. Why are all the times wrong? I posted that answer at 9:46AM, not 6:46.

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  10. While his wife was away on a business trip for work, Mr. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. started seeing his old high school girlfriend, Miss Daisy Windsor. She however, refused to have anything to do with him due to the fact that he was still married, so he bribed her with $25,000. She gladly accepted and he moved in with her for the remainder of the time that his wife was away. When his wife returned, she found out about what he had done while she was away and divorced him and paid for the entire thing by herself. Three years later, Lawrence Exeter, Sr. was still dating Miss Daisy Windsor and they moved in together permanently. He bought her flowers, jewelry and he even paid for her to have the house redecorated. On November 16, he took her on a cruise to Hawaii and when Mr. Exeter, Sr. received word that his son was engaged he wrote him a check for $200,000, then paid for their hotel and returned home. As a “wedding gift” Mr. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. gave his son his checkbook. Over the next year and four months, Mr. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. and Miss Flossie Wentworth happily planned their wedding and in May they were wed. In November, only six months of being married, they called things off and Lawrence Exeter, Jr. paid Miss Flossie Wentworth $50,000 on her demand. They then fought for custody over the house and the rest of their possessions. Mr. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. then paid his wife that had been traveling the world the whole time, $5,000. She demanded a divorce and then he paid her another $75,000 to cover the child support of a kid he never knew he had. He tried to get sole custody of the kid but was not ever able to. On August, 5 Mr. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. had a heart attack from all the stress and debt he was in and was rushed to the hospital and was saved by the very doctor that helped birth him, but only eleven days after entering the hospital, poor Lawrence Exeter’s father, Lawrence Exeter, Sr. was making out another check for the Hollywood Mortuary.

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  11. While Rency was having his fun at college, back at home things weren’t going to well. Mr. Lawrence Exeter and Mrs. Darla Exeter were getting into a lot of fights, mainly because Lawrence was never home. Mr. Exeter would be working all day and all night in his office while Darla was at home alone. It turned out that Mr. Exeter was having a secret affair with his secretary Miss Daisy Windsor. He even took Miss Daisy on a cruise to France. The affair carried on for about another two years until Mr. Exeter felt guilty and wanted to change things with his wife. So he went to the university club florists and bought her flowers, built her a new room using renaissance interior decorators, even took her to Hawaii for their anniversary and got her a diamond ring. Everything seemed good between Lawrence and Darla, until Rency their son found out about his affair with Miss Windsor. Mr. Lawrence begged his son not to tell his mother and ended up bribing him with money and paid him 200,000.00 just so he wouldn’t say anything. Rency spent the money on a girl he met at college he bought her sweets, a dress, lingerie, and flowers. He ended up proposing to her and bought her a diamond ring, and they got married. But just like his father, Rency had an affair with his high school sweetheart Miss Flossie Wentworth. Rency and his wife ended up getting a divorce and when his mom heard the news she was furious. Rency and his mom got in a huge fight and rency accidently told his mother about his father’s affair. Furious Darla comes home and shoots Mr. Lawrence with a gun and he got sent to the hospital where he there died.

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  12. Katie Smith
    Smoulder
    Hon. English
    9-22-11
    Ordeal by cheque 2
    Sr. Lawrence Exter was attracted to a Miss. Daisy Windsor. They were going on a French line cruise that Miss. Daisy is paying for, for both. They decided to have a very nice dinner and go dancing. So they rented the banquet room for the entire night. The next day, Sr. Lawrence went down to the florist shop to buy his girl some flowers, roses to be exact. He also ordered a bouquet to be delivered later in the evening. After they got back from their long trip, Lawrence had to call the Rivera Heights land co. to check up on his house he is buying for a surprise for him and his soon to be fiancé.
    After he checked up on that, he had to call the interior decorations for the soon to be wedding, if she says yes of course. Then he had to run in town and purchase Daisy a diamond ring. After all that, he had to go on a work trip to Hawaii. But an unfortunate thing happened on his trip, he had a serious heart attack and now he is very ill. When he got back he knew he was going to die, so he gave everything to his son, Lawrence Exter Jr, Including $200,000.00. Sr. Lawrence checked into the Ambassador suite that night, called Daisy to come there, proposed to her and she said yes, and then died right after that. It was very tragic.
    Weeks after that, Lawrence Jr went to the coconut grove sweets shop to buy his lady some candy. While he was there, he decided to surprise her and go dancing. So like old times he went and bought her a corsage, and would buy the dress later at the gown store. Lawrence and his girlfriend were getting pretty serious, so he decided to buy her lingerie, just for fun. After that all took place, he went back down to the gown shop and bought her a bright orange dress. A few days later he wanted to get married to her so he bought her a diamond ring from the Broadway diamond co. After that he went to see Miss. Flossie Wentworth about some wedding plans. Turns out she was a faker and so they both had to go to court. Then, he finally got married but was not done with court yet, only one more day. After that Lawrence’s sister was having a grad party, so he gave her money for college. The same day they went to see the doctor, walker and walker, and it turns out Mrs. Lawrence is pregnant. A few days later he wanted to change his name to Sr. Lawrence, so he did at wall and smith. After that Mrs. Lawrence had a doctor’s appt. at they hospital with Dr. David McCoy. They found out that they are having a girl! After that they decided to change his fathers grave from R.I.P to Rest In Peace father.

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  13. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. visits his girlfriend, Miss Daisy Windsor. At this time, he loans her $25,000. He then plans a vacation to France. So, he buys a French Line ticket. Then, he makes his reservations in France, costing him $5,000. Three years later, Exeter, Sr. buys flowers at University Club florists, costing him $76.50. Four months later, he goes back to University Club Florists to buy flowers again. This time, costing him $312.75. A couple months later, Lawrence Exeter, Sr. decides to purchase a new home at Riviera Heights Land Co. He spends $56,000 on this. He wants to renovate his house so he spends $22,000 at Renaissance Interior Decorators. Later in November, Lawrence Exeter, Jr. decides that he wants to get married. So, Exeter, Sr. buys his son an engagement ring for the soon to be Mrs. Exeter. Exeter, Sr. spent $678.45 on this. After a proposal, Exeter, Jr. wants a vacation to Hawaii. Upon his request, Exeter, Sr. buys his son a Hawaii Steamship ticket for $560. Exeter wants his son to have a little bit of spending money, so he gives him $200,000. Once Exeter, Jr. and his woman reach Hawaii, they stay at the Ambassador Hotel, already paid for by Exeter, Sr. This cost him $2,250. About a month later, before Exeter, Jr. and his lover’s departure from Hawaii, they go to Coconut Grove Sweet Shoppe. Exeter spent $27 on some assorted chocolates. Later in July, Exeter, Jr. spends $25 at Parisian Gown Shoppe to rent a tuxedo. Five months later, Exeter, Jr. takes his woman to the Anita Lingerie Salon to spend some big bucks on some undergarments for his wife, costing him $750. In April, Exeter, Jr. goes back to the gown shoppe to buys his soon to be bride’s gown. He spent $1,150 on this. Just like his father, Exeter, Jr. went to University Club Florists to buy some flowers for a woman. He spent $87 on flowers. Close to the big day, Exeter, Jr. pays the wedding planner, Miss. Flossie Wentworth, to plan his wedding. He paid her $50,000. After the marriage, Exeter, Jr. made a payment to Wall and Smith Attorneys at Law to purchase he and his wife’s marriage license. He paid $525. As a gift of love, Exeter , Jr. gives Mrs. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. $5,000. Soon thereafter, Exeter,Jr. and his wife have an affair. Their court appearance cost Exeter, Jr. $52. Marie Lawrence Exeter sued Exeter, Jr. for $75,000. Exeter, Jr. paid his lawyer $700. He also paid for Marie Lawrence Exeter’s lawyer, costing him $450. About a month later, Exeter, Jr. suffered a severe heart attack. He was hospitalized and this cost his father $100. Exeter, Jr. underwent surgery and did not make it through. Exeter, Sr. paid Dr. David M. McCoy $75 for his hard work. After Exeter, Jr.’s death, Exeter, Sr. paid Hollywood Mortuary $1,280 for the preparation of his son’s body.

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  14. The second part to this story begins with Lawrence Exeter, Sr paying Miss Daisy Windsor to plan out a trip for the couple. On 6/9/23 Lawrence Exeter pays for the trip for his wife and him. After they got back from their trip Lawrence Exeter, Sr went a little crazy on the money spending. In a period of 8 months Lawrence, Sr spent $22,000. What Mrs. Exeter didn’t know is that Mr. Exeter was putting money into all sorts of stuff such as stocks. She also didn’t know that Mr. Exeter was having an affair, and his son was cashing in on it. One day when Lawrence Sr, was not watching out Lawrence, Jr followed him to an apartment on the other side of town one day and caught his dad with another women. He told his father “either you pay me or ill tell mom then your job or reputation will be ruined.” After that Mr. Exeter got the point and stopped seeing his little mistress. With all of his money Lawrence, Jr bought his girlfriend lots of new things one of those new things he got her was a ring a big engagement ring. He paid Miss Flossie Worth $50,000 to plan their wedding. All the sudden the wedding was at a standstill. Someone had found out the Mr. Exeter had been into the bad stock business. All of Lawrence, Sr money was gone so he asked Lawrence, Jr to help him pay for the lawyers that he needed. Mrs. Exter didn’t know what to believe she knew something was up when all their money was gone, but she just thought it was he husband having another affair with some other women. It got to the point where she asked her son to give her money to help her with the house payment and to get food. All she wanted was to keep up her husband’s reputation even though he cheated on her she just wanted her family to stay a family. On 6/20/31 Mr. Lawrence, Sr went to court and was found guilty of all charges. After all of this because there family had no more money Lawrence, Jr was forced to pay everything. About a month later the courts had found evidence that Lawrence Exeter, Sr was not guilty of all charges and was released from the county jail. Unfortunately not even 10 days after getting out Lawrence, Sr got deathly ill and even though he tried his hardest to stay strong for his family on 7/13/31 Mr. Lawrence Exeter, Sr passed away. On 7/16/31 his funeral was held. Come to find out Lawrence, Sr didn’t die of old age he had contracted AIDS from one of his past lovers. This story just goes to show you watch what you do because it might come back to bite you in the butt.

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  15. In 1922 Lawrence Sr. and his wife got a divorce. A year later he is bribing Miss Daisy Windsor to marry him for 25,000. She does not want to marry him, do he takes her to France and buys her flowers. He even bought a house for them to live in so she would marry him. After about a month Lawrence Sr. gets some guts and decides to ask her to marry him again, but with a ring. He new diamonds were a girl’s best friend, so of course she said yes! Two days later they decided to go to Hawaii to celebrate their new lives together. When Lawrence Jr. came home from college, he wasn’t aware of his father’s fast decision. Obviously Lawrence Jr. was upset, so to keep peace Lawrence Sr. wrote Lawrence Jr. a check for $200,000 to spend on what he wanted. Lawrence Jr. knew exactly what he was going to do; he was going to follow in his fathers footsteps. Lawrence Jr. found himself a girlfriend named Flossie to wow with all of his money and decided to take her to a hotel to pamper her. He let her buy candy, a dress, and she
    even got her hair done. After she pampers herself, he buys her flowers and asks her to marry him with a diamond ring. She knew that wouldn’t be enough to get married to him, so he then wrote her a check for $50,000 which she gladly accepted. The next day they seal it with a marriage license. As a wedding gift Lawrence gives his new wife 5,000 to spend on it how she pleases. In the next year, Lawrence Jr. and Flossie got a divorce, and Lawrence’s mother was concerned, so she wrote him a check for $75,000 to get his life together. He does like his mother told him, and he went to see someone who could give him some assistance, but not the kind of assistance his mother was talking about. Lawrence became involved in a gang and bought drugs from Walker ad Walker to ease his suffering from his recent divorce. He then pays Wall and Smith to protect him from all the gangs that wanted him dead. Wall and smith obviously didn’t do a good job because Lawrence Jr. got in a fight and lost. He was severely injured and had to go to the hospital, which his dad paid for. His dad then realized that his wife Daisy was pregnant, so he paid Dr. David M. McCoy for her doctor appointment to check on the baby. Sadly a day later his son Lawrence Jr. died and Lawrence Sr. paid Hollywood Mortuary to takes car of his son’s body.

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  16. Lawrence Exeter Sr. is married with a child of his own. People who looked at them would have seen a seemily happy and very stable household. But when Mrs. Exeter leaves for a business trip, Lawrence gets ahold of his high school sweetheart, Miss Daisy Windsor. He tells her how much he still loves her, and when she says she can't take him back because he is married, he bribes her with flowers, and $25,000. She buys a house, and as another gift, he offers to pay for the expenses of having it redecorated. Lawrence plans a trip to Hawaii for him and Daisy Windsor, and lies to Mrs. Exeter about where he is, and what he is doing. The truth comes out, and Mrs Exeter is furious with him. She can't believe her own husband would go behind her back, and she certainly can't believe the man she loves would betray his promise to her. She files for a divorce and it is finalized soon after. In the midst of all the chaos, their son Lawrence Exeter Jr. became engaged to his girlfriend he met in college, Miss Flossie Wentworth. When he finds out, Lawrence Exter Sr. pays his son $200,000 to cover wedding costs. Lawrence Exeter Jr. purchases flowers, a wedding gown, and all the other wants/ needs of his bride to be's dream wedding. They get married, go on a honeymoon, and return home. They are very happy for quite some time, and things seem to be working out for the two of them. One day Lawrence Exeter Jr. has a bad car accident and is put in the hospital for several days, requiring surgeries and much rest. Only a short time after, however, he must say his final farewell to his father Lawrence Exeter Sr. who passed away due to sudden heart failure.

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  17. Lori Ray
    Period 5, Honors English 11
    Mr. Smoulder
    September 22, 2011
    In part two Mr. Execter is showing his true self, he and his wife have been friends with this woman named Daisy Windsor. His wife, as unknowing as she is, could not see that he had actually grown to have feelings for this woman that was supposed to be their friend. Since his son is now off in college Lawrence thinks he can act on his feelings now, so he pays the woman $25,000 to keep it a secret from his wife! So after a while they start to become closer, I mean Mr. Exeter was gonig all out buying her flowers, took her on a cruise on the French Line, and even helps her redecorate the inside of her house! He realizes he is falling in love with her so he buys her a diamond ring and says, once him and his wife are divorced he plans to marry her! Keeping this all a very low secret to his family, he later gets a phone call from his son saying he has falling in love and wants to get married, so Lawrence being as excited as he was for his son he gives him $200,000 and tells him to use it all on the wedding! To get him started his dad pays for a hotel for them to stay in and relax! His son then started to prepare for his own wedding, buying everything he thought he would possibly need! After they got married Lawrence Jr. decides he has completely changed his mind and does not want to be with her anymore. So they got a divorce, yes it was a quick marriage, and it was time for his dad to tell him and his mother the truth. So once he told them what he was doing, Mrs. Exector was very angry and upset and her son just couldn't believe this had happened! He kept the rest of the money he had left over from his marriage to help his mom pay fro ma divorce and to work on paying her bills. After all of this, Mr. Lawrence Execter senior ends up having a heart attack and gonig to the hospital, he got out and paid the doctor for all the help and then decided he would need to move on with his life!

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  18. In the rest of the story, Lawrence Exeter, Sr decided he wanted to go on vacation, but he didn’t know where to go. His wife suggested that they go to France for a couple months. While planning for the trip, she wanted to go on a cruise to France instead of taking a plane. When they arrived in France, they went searching for a house to live in and some land. Eventually they found a smaller house on a hill. They had it renovated to a renaissance style. Lawrence Exeter, Sr surprised his wife his with a big diamond ring when they went to the gift shop. Later on he felt bad for his son who was working at the college, so he decided to pay for a vacation for him to Hawaii. Lawrence, Jr was really excited and he went down right away. He stayed at a luxury hotel and he went to various shops like the Coconut Grove Sweet Shop and the Hawaii Gift Shop. He went to the beach and he met a girl about his age named Flossie. Because of her, he decided to stay in Hawaii for a few extra months. Unfortunately, she stole his money over time and he found out about this, so he hired a lawyer. However, he couldn’t prove her guilty and he lost a good portion of his money. He never recovered emotionally and he got really sick. The doctors couldn’t get him any better and he eventually died. His dad was unaware of this and was deeply saddened. He took his son to the Hollywood Mortuary after the funeral.

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  19. In the second part of this story, Lawrence Exeter Sr. goes to Miss Daisy Windsor to have her plan a wedding for his son. He then bought a French Line ticket to go to Banquet de France to buy flowers. He then went to find a house for his son to live in with his new wife. He found a house at Rivera Heights Land Co. After he found the house he had the Renaissance Interior Decorators come in and redecorate the house. He bought a cruise for his son. Lawrence Exeter Sr. then paid for the wedding ring for his son to give to his fiancé. He also gave his son $200,000 for a wedding present. He then bought his son a few nights at the Ambassador Hotel. Lawrence Exeter Jr. now starts to pay for his own things. He went to the sweet shop to buy some candy. Then he went and bought a gown. Mr. Exeter Jr. went to a diamond shop and bought his fiancé a big diamond. He then met Miss. Flossie Wentworth. Lawrence Jr. then went to court. He then paid his mother $75,000. Mr Exeter Jr. got into a bad accident and got put into the hospital. Mr Exeter Jr. eventually died and his dad took him to the Hollywood Mortuary for the funeral.

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  20. While his son at college Lawrence Exeter met up with an old friend, Miss Daisy Windsor, and gave her some money to find a house for the future. He left with his wife for some time on a cruise to France for a large Banquet for Lawrence's Business.When he returned he bought Miss daisy many flowers and met with her often. He paid for their future house's land and renovated the house. He Bought a ring and had a plan ready. He sent His wife off on a trip to Hawaii and gave his son a lot of his money. Lawrence Sr. reserved a hotel for Miss Windsor and himself and they spent the next day at coconut Grove. Jr., out of college and in possession of an abundance of money spent his time with many women. he bought gowns,lingerie, and flowers for them. He bought a Diamond and Bribed poor Miss. Flossie Wentworth to marry him. They had Wall and Smith Attorneys make the marriage official. he paid her some more money, but she could not stand him anymore and got a divorce. He felt bad for wasting his dads money, so he paid what was left back to his mother. After going to many more attorneys and counselors Lawrence Jr. committed suicide. He had a rough life and was always a trouble maker. With his son dead, Lawrence Exeter Sr. returned to the same Hospital Jr. was born in and was able to pay for the hospital bill, doctor bill, and mortuary fee.

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  21. "while his son was at college" sorry

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  22. This story is about a family called the Lawrence’s. The wife was thinking her husband was cheating on her so she check out her husband’s checks out over a 8 year span. The 25000 dollar check to a miss Daisy Windsor was for a used Cadillac for their daughter she knew that the 5000 dollar check at the banquet de France . A 585 dollar check to a liner was a down payment for their 25 anniversaries. Mrs. Lawrence was getting really nervous about two checks for 576.50 to a university club florist but it turned out it was just for their anniversary. Mrs. Lawrence had no clue what husband could spend 56000 grand on to a Riviera heights land corporation. It ended up being for a new pool for their back yard. Mr. Lawrence ended up making it an indoor pool so there was a 22000 dollars for the inside to a renaissance interior shop. When Mrs. Lawrence saw a Beverly diamond gift shop and almost had a divorce right there and then but found out her husband took her ring one night and got it fix and polished. She felt so bad but there was still doubt so she kept searching and found. When she saw the Hawaii steamship, check and the ambassador hotel for almost 3 grand. She thought he had just straight up cheated on her while she took her daughter shopping in New York a couple weekends ago. But turned out he was planning to go to Hawaii for his brother’s wedding. Mrs. Lawrence knew the 200,000 was for their sons collage. She had been with her sun when he went to Parisian gown shop and the Anita lingerie salon for new clothes. She also knew about Miss Flossie Wentworth because she hired her to paint her sons whole new house. The Reno municipal court throw her for a loop. She was thinking to herself did he have a kid or something but all it was, was a parking ticket her son had gotten. She thought this because walker and walker and wall and smith are big baby shops, and then the hospital bill, well she figured he had a kid or something but it was shopping for his brother’s new baby and he only had a checkup. She also went to Dr. David McCoy and check the records for her husband’s appointments they were legit. There was a 75000 thousand dollar check to Marie but that’s her son’s secretary which didn’t make sense but she didn’t want to get into that. . The final check was for Mr. Lawrence’s mom’s funeral. So all this searching and all she got was that she owed her husband a big apologize.

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  23. Mr. Lawrence sends money to Miss Windsor because they have been secretly having an affair throughout his marriage. The money is to keep her quiet because he has decided to call it off and now she has decided to black mail him. After this he decides to tell his wife what really happened. She is irate and threatens to leave him so he takes her on the cruise and buys her luxury items such as a diamond necklace and flowers. After sweet talking her into staying they decide to build a house. Once things settle down Lawrence Jr. announces that he is going to get married. He takes his girlfriend on a cruise to Hawaii and proposes/marries her there. They live happily together for a few months they decide to separate. The two have many legal problems but eventually get everything worked out. After paying her 50 thousand dollars Lawrence Jr. never talks to her again. After separating Lawrence Jr. experiences some health problems that cause his leg to fall off. His condition gets worse and spreads throughout his body. After a month or Lawrence Jr. dies from an unknown infection of the body. His father pays for a very nice funeral and memorials to make sure he is always remembered.

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  24. In this story Lawrence Exeter, Sr. bought a car from Miss Daisy Windsor. He took his wife on a cruise then rented out the banquet room for their anniversary dinner. He bought flowers for his wives Valentine’s Day present at University Club Florists. Then three years later bought flowers for her birthday along with candy in a bouquet. He paid $56,000 for new acres of land to add to his previous house acres. He later had it decorated then went to the Beverly Diamond Gift Shoppe to buy a necklace for his wife. After he bought it he took her on another cruise to Hawaii. After they got back he gave his son a portion of his inheritance worth $200,000. Lawrence Exeter, Jr. bought his girlfriend lingerie, and later, flowers and an engagement ring for their wedding. After the wedding, Lawrence bought a house for the new couple from Miss Flossie Wentworth. About six months later, he wrote his mom a check to give her a loan for their new investment. On July 15th, 1931 Lawrence Exeter, Sr. visited the doctor to find out he had a terminating condition. The next day he dies and his son pays the mortuary for his burial costs.

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  25. Lawrence Exeter and his wife had a little girl and went to shop for her. Then they went to french line and Banquet de France for her.They went home and wanted to redo their floors so they called University club florists.Two months later they wanted to get rid of their hill so they called Rivera Heights land co. His wife then went to Renaissance Interior decorators to repaint the house. Lawrence bought his wife a ring for their anniversary at Beverly Diamond Shoppe. They took a trip to Hawaii. When they came back, their son needed money so Lawrence flew out to him and stayed in a hotel and they went to Coconut Grove Sweet Shoppe. He found a girl and had an affair and went to a gown shop to put a down payment on a dress for her.He then bought her lingerie and the gown. He redid her floors and then bought her a ring and lent her money. He got a divorce from his wife and she beat him so bad that he went to the hospital and died there. His girlfriend got everything.

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  26. In the second part of the story, Lawrence Exeter, Sr. is having an affair with Miss Daisy Winsor. He gives her $25,000 and then he takes her on a trip to France with him. He charms her with fancy dinners, flowers, and jewelry. He even bought a house in Riviera Heights for the two of them on August 11, 1926 and he pays an interior decorator to decorate their new home. He attempts to live this double life, but his son soon finds out. Lawrence Exeter, Sr. pays his son $200,000 on November 21, 1926 so he would not tell anyone about his affair with Miss Winsor. The day after his son finds out, Lawrence Exeter, Sr. checks into the Ambassador Hotel to think about what he has done and what he should do now that his son knows.

    In February of 1927, Lawrence Jr. started dating Miss Flossie Wentworth. He bought her chocolates for their first date, he bought her a dress from Parisian Gown Shoppe in July, and took her to the spa in December. On April 1, 1928, Lawrence Jr. bought his girlfriend another dress, but this time it was very expensive. In May of 1930 he bought her flowers and a diamond ring and he asked her to marry him. She said yes and they ended up getting married in November of 1930 after making a prenuptial agreement.

    On June 20, 1931, Lawrence Exeter, Jr. decides to tell his mother, Marie Wharton Exeter, about his father’s affair. She then decided she wants a divorce, so Lawrence Jr. lends her money and goes to different law offices to help his mother in the divorce. When Lawrence Sr. finds out his son broke their promise and told Marie about his affair, he got very angry and got into a fight with his son. Lawrence Sr. checks Lawrence Jr. into the hospital where he was pronounced dead 10 days later.

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  27. After Lawrence junior dropped out of Stanford University Lawrence Sr was pretty down in the dumps and decided to go to some place that a friend told him about. This place was in France so he bought a ticket and left. When he got there he was to ask for Miss Daisy Windsor, he spent the night with her and blew 25,000 dollars on gambling, alcohol, and other types of fun. He awoke in the morning with a giant tattoo on his butt and had to use the French line trying to call places to get it removed. He spent $585.00 calling all over France. He knew the night before must have gotten a little out of hand because Miss. Daisy was pretty furious with him when they woke up. So he went out and bought her a $5,000 bouquet. He bought some accessories to go along with it such as a box of chocolate for $76.50 and diamond bracelet for $312.50. Miss Daisy didn’t except her gift and Lawrence Sr. ended spending his next and last night in the Ambassador Hotel for $2,250. He bought seven bottles of champagne for himself and was feeling pretty depressed. He went out on the balcony for some fresh air and was leaning on it, but it broke and he fell to his death of 5,000 feet. The cops came and collected the body and then Lawrence Jr. automatically inherited all of his father’s money. Lawrence Jr. Flew out to France and ended up encountering Miss. Daisy. They fell in love and decided to elope. Lawrence Jr. spent $25.00 at a gown shop buying the cheapest dress he could find and then moving onto the lingerie shop to spend $750.00 on evening wear. For their anniversary they spent the night going to a Broadway show. Miss Daisy was not impressed and filed for divorce three days after they married. Lawrence Jr. was able to convince her to give him another try and on 7/5/11 Mrs. Lawrence Exeter Jr gave birth to their son. He was delivered by the same doctor as Lawrence Jr. During child labor Lawrence Jr. lost his wife and his son lost his mother. They spent 1,280 on a funeral for her. It was a sad, sad day.

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  28. Lawrence senior spent $ 25,000 dollars to start this story out, he bought a “women” with this money. The he put money down on a French line to go on one day. He decided to go to France and he spent $ 5,000 on the trip. Three years later he spent a total of $ 389.25 on flowers, he really made his wife mad (she found out about the women from 3 years earlier). To make it up to his wife they decided to move and build a new house. This still didn’t make her completely happy so he got her a new diamond ring. They then went on a small trip to Hawaii. While they were in Hawaii their son got into trouble so Lawrence Sr. gave him two hundred thousand dollars. Their hotel bill in Hawaii was $ 2,250.00. Three months later Lawrence Jr. took his father’s check book and in this time he went to Coconut Grove Sweet Shoppe, and then five months later brought his wife got her hair done costing $ 750. Then he went back to the gown Shoppe to get something a lot nicer. In may 1930 Lawrence junior went and bought flowers and a ring for his wife for their anniversary. After their nice anniversary they got a divorce in November resulting in $ 55,525.00. Seven months later Jr. was back in court which cost him $ 52, but his lawyer cost $ 75,000. This very same day he bought a walker and a few other things for his father. His father was starting to get sick, but junior’s ex-wife shot him and he was admitted to the hospital on July 5th, 1931. Ten days later Lawrence Exeter Jr. dies. The last check written in this story was one day later when the morgue was paid.

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